T
HE
name of L
UCRETIA
D
AVIDSON is familiar to all readers of poetry.
Dying
at the early age of seventeen, she has been rendered famous not less,
and
certainly not more, by her own precocious genius than by three
memorable
biographies — one by President Morse, of the American Society of Arts,
another by Miss Sedgwick, and a third by Robert Southey. Mr. Irving had
formed an acquaintance with some of her relatives, and thus, while in
Europe,
took great interest in all that was said or written
[page
220:] of his young countrywoman. Upon his return to America,
he called upon
Mrs.
Davidson, and then, in 1833, first saw the subject of the memoir now
before
us,
* — a fairy-like child of eleven. Three years
afterwards he met with
her again, and then found her in delicate health. Three years having
again
elapsed, the MSS. which form the basis of the present volume, were
placed
in his hands by Mrs. Davidson, as all that remained of her daughter.
Few books have interested us more profoundly. Yet
the interest does not appertain solely to Margaret. "In fact the
narrative,"
says Mr. Irving, "will be found almost as illustrative of the character
of the mother as of the child; they were singularly identified in
taste,
feeling, and pursuits; tenderly entwined together by maternal and
filial
affection, they reflected as inexpressibly touching grace and interest
upon each other by this holy relationship, and affecting groups in
modern
literature, to sunder them." In these words the biographer conveys no
more
than a just idea of the exquisite loveliness of the picture here
presented
to view.
The MSS. handed Mr. Irving, have been
suffered, in
a great measure, to tell their own thrilling tale. There has been no
injudicious
attempt at mere authorship. The compiler has confined himself to
chronological
arrangement of his memoranda, and to such simple and natural comments
as
serve to bind rather than to illustrate where no illustration was
needed.
These memoranda consist of relations by Mrs. Davidson of the infantine
peculiarities of her daughter, and of her habits and general thoughts
in
more matured life, intermingled with letters from the young poetess to
intimate friends. There is also a letter from the bereaved mother to
Miss
Sedgwick, detailing the last moments of the child — a letter so full of
all potent nature, so full of minute beauty, and truth and pathos, that
to read it without tears would be to prove one's self less than human.
The "Poetical Remains" of this young
creature, who
perished (of consumption) in her sixteenth year, occupy about two
hundred
pages of a somewhat closely printed octavo. The longest poem
[page
221:] is called "Lenore," and consists of some two thousand
lines, varying in metre from the ordinary octo-syllabic, to the
four-footed,
or twelve-syllabled iambic. The story, which is a romantic love-tale,
not
ill-conceived in its incidents, is told with a skill which might put
more
practised bards to the blush, and with ocasional [[occasional]] bursts
of the truest poetic fire. But although as indicative of her future
power,
it is the most important, as it is the longest of her productions, yet,
as a whole, it is not equal to some of her shorter compositions. It was
written not long before her death, at the age of fifteen, and (as we
glean
from the biography) after patient reflection, with much care, and with
a high resolve to do something for fame. As the work of so mere a
child,
it is unquestionably wonderful. Its
length, viewed in connexion
with its keeping, its unity, its adaptation, and completeness, will
impress
the metaphysician most forcibly, when surveying the capacities of its
author.
Powers are here brought into play which are the last to be matured. For
fancy we might have looked, and for the lower evidences of skill in a
perfect
versification and the like, but hardly for what we see in Lenore.
Yet remarkable as this production is,
from the pen
of a girl of fifteen, it is by no means so incomprehensible as are some
of the shorter pieces. We have known instances — rarely, to be sure
— but still we have known instances when finer poems in every respect
than
Lenore have been written by children of as immature age — but we look
around
us in vain for anything composed at eight years, which can bear
comparison
with the lines subjoined
|
TO
MAMMA.
Farewell, dear mother, for a while
I must resign thy plaintive smile;
May angels watch thy couch of wo,
And joys unceasing round thee flow.
May the almighty Father spread
His sheltering wings above thy head.
It is not long that we must part,
Then cheer thy downcast drooping heart.
Remember, oh! remember me,
Unceasing is my love for thee!
When death shall sever earthly ties,
When thy loved form all senseless lies. [page 222:]
Oh! That my form with thine could flee,
And roam through wide eternity;
Could tread with thee the courts of heaven,
And count the brilliant stars of even. |
Nor are these stanzas, written at ten, in any
degree
less remarkable —
|
MY NATIVE LAKE.
Thy verdant banks, thy lucid stream,
Lit by the sun's resplendent beam,
Reflect each bending tree so light
Upon thy bounding bosom bright.
Could I but see thee once again,
My own, my beautiful Champlain!
The little isles that deck thy breast,
And calmly on thy bosom rest,
How often, in my childish glee,
I've sported round them, bright and free!
Could I but see thee once again,
My own, my beautiful Champlain!
How oft I've watch'd the fresh'ning shower
Bending the summer tree and flower,
And felt my little heart beat high
As the bright rainbow graced the sky.
Could I but see thee once again,
My own, my beautiful Champlain!
And shall I never see thee more,
My native lake, my much-loved shore,
And must I bid a long adieu,
My dear, my infant home, to you?
Shall I not see thee once again,
My own, my beautiful Champlain? |
In the way of criticism upon these extraordinary
compositions,
Mr. Irving has attempted little, and, in general, he seems more
affected
by the loveliness and the purity of the child than even by the genius
she
has evinced — however highly he may have estimated this latter. In
respect,
however, to a poem entitled "My Sister Lucretia," — he thus speaks —
"We
have said that the example of her sister Lucretia was incessantly
before
her, and no better proof can be given of it than in the following
lines,
which breathe the heavenly aspirations of her pure young spirit,
in
strains to us quite unearthly. We may have read poetry more
artificially
perfect in its structure, but never any more truly divine in its
inspiration."
The nature of inspiration is disputable
[page 223:]
— and we will not pretend to assert that Mr. Irving is in the wrong.
His
words, however, in their hyperbole, do wrong to his subject, and would
be hyperbole still, if applied to the most exalted poets of all time.
——
The analogies of Nature are
universal; and just as
the most rapidly growing herbage is the most speedy in its decay — just
as the ephemera struggles to perfection in a day only to perish in that
day's decline — so the mind is early matured only to be early in its
decadence;
and when we behold in the eye of infancy the soul of the adult, it is
but
indulging in a day dream to hope for any farther proportionate
development.
Should the prodigy survive to ripe age, a mental imbecility, not far
removed
from idiocy itself, is too frequently the result. From this rule the
exceptions
are rare indeed; but it should be observed that, when the exception
does
occur, the intellect is of a Titan cast even to the days of its extreme
senility, and acquires renown not in one, but in all the wide fields of
fancy and of reason.
Lucretia Maria Davidson,
* the
elder
of the two sweet
sisters who have acquired so much of fame prematurely, had not, like
Margaret,
an object of poetical emulation in her own family. In her genius, be it
what it may, there is more of self-dependence — less of the imitative.
Her mother's generous romance of soul may have stimulated, but did not
instruct. Thus, although she has actually given less
evidence
of
power (in our opinion) than Margaret — less written proof — still its
indication
must be considered at [[a]] higher value. Both perished at sixteen.
Margaret,
we think, has left the better poems — certainly, the more precocious —
while Lucretia evinces more unequivocally the soul of the poet. We have
quoted in full some stanzas composed by the former at eight years of
age.
The latter's earliest effusions are dated at fourteen. Yet the first
compositions
of the two seem to us of nearly equal merit.
The most elaborate production of
Margaret is "Lenore."
It
[page 224:] was written not long before her
death,
at the age of fifteen, after patient reflection, with much care, and
with
all that high resolve to do something for fame with which the
reputation
of her sister had inspired her. Under such circumstances, and with the
early poetical education which she could not have failed to receive, we
confess that, granting her a trifle more than average talent, it would
have been rather a matter for surprise had she produced a worse, than
had
she produced a better poem than "Lenore." Its
length, viewed in
connexion with its keeping, its unity, its adaptation, and its
completeness
(and all these are points having reference to artistical
knowledge
and perseverance) will impress the critic more favorably than its
fancy,
or any other indication of poetic power. In all the more important
qualities
we have seen far — very far finer poems than "Lenore" written at a much
earlier age than fifteen.
"Amir Khan," the longest and chief
composition of
Lucretia, has been long known to the reading public. Partly through
Professor
Morse, yet no doubt partly through their own merits, the poems found
their
way to Southey, who, after his peculiar fashion, and not unmindful of
his
previous
furores in the case of Kirke White, Chatterton, and
others
of precocious ability, or at least celebrity, thought proper to
review
them in the Quarterly. This was at a period when we humbled ourselves,
with a subserviency which would have been disgusting had it not been
ludicrous,
before the crudest critical
dicta of Great Britain. It pleased
the
laureate, after some squibbling in the way of demurrer, to speak of the
book in question as follows: — "In these poems there is enough of
originality,
enough of aspiration, enough of conscious energy, enough of growing
power
to warrant any expectations, however sanguine, which the patrons and
the
friends and parents of the deceased could have formed." Meaning
nothing,
or rather meaning anything, as we choose to interpret it, this sentence
was still sufficient (and in fact the half of it would have been more
than
sufficient) to establish upon an immoveable basis the reputation of
Miss
Davidson in America. Thenceforward any examination of her true claims
to
distinction was considered little less than a declaration of heresy.
Nor
does the awe of the laureate's
ipse dixit seem even yet to have
entirely subsided
[page 225:] "The genius of
Lucretia
Davidson," says Miss Sedgwick, "has had the meed of far more
authoritative
praise than ours; the following tribute is from the London Quarterly
Review."
What this lady — for whom and for whose opinion we still have the
highest
respect — can mean by calling the praise of Southey "more
authoritative"
than her own, is a point we shall not pause to determine.
Her
praise
is at least honest, or we hope so. Its "authority" is in exact
proportion
with each one's estimate of her judgement. But it would not do to say
all
this of the author of "Thalaba." It would not do to say it in the
hearing
of men who are sane, and who, being sane, have perused the leading
articles
in the "London Quarterly Review" during the ten or fifteen years prior
to that period when Robert Southey, having concocted "The Doctor," took
definite leave of his wits. In fact, for anything that we have yet seen
or heard to the contrary, the opinion of the laureate, in respect to
the
poem of "Amir Khan," is a matter still only known to Robert Southey.
But
were it known to all the world, as Miss Sedgwick supposes with so
charmingly
innocent an air; we mean to say were it really an honest opinion, —
this
"authoritative praise," — still it would be worth, in the eyes of every
sensible person, only just so much as it demonstrates, or makes a show
of demonstrating. Happily the day has gone by, and we trust forever,
when
men are content to swear blindly by the words of a master,
poet-laureate
though he be. But what Southey says of the poem is at best an opinion
and
no more. What Miss Sedgwick says of it is very much in the same
predicament.
"Amir Khan," she writes, "has long been before the public, but we think
it has suffered from a general and very natural distrust of precocious
genius. The versification is graceful, the story beautifully developed,
and the orientalism well sustained.
We think it would not have done
discredit to our most popular poets in the meridian of their fame; as
the
production of a girl of fifteen it seems prodigious." The cant of a
kind heart when betraying into error a naturally sound judgement, is
perhaps
the only species of cant in the world not altogether contemptible.
We yield to no one in warmth of
admiration for the
personal character of these sweet sisters, as that character is
depicted
by the mother, by Miss Sedgwick, and by Mr. Irving. But it costs
[page
226:] us no effort to distinguish that which, in our heart,
is love of their worth, from that which, in our intellect, is
appreciation
of their poetic ability. With the former, as critic, we have nothing to
do. The distinction is one too obvious for comment; and its observation
would have spared us much twaddle on the part of the commentators upon
"Amir Khan."
We will endeavor to convey, as
concisely as possible,
some idea of this poem as it exists, not in the fancy of the
enthusiastic,
but in fact. It includes four hundred and forty lines. The metre is
chiefly
octo-syllabic. At one point it is varied by a casual introduction of an
anapæst in the first and second foot; at another (in a song) by
seven
stanzas of four lines each, rhyming alternately; the metre
anapæstic
of
four feet alternating with three. The versification is always good, so
far as the meagre written rules of our English prosody extend; that is
to say, there is seldom a syllable too much or too little; but long and
short syllables are placed at random, and a crowd of consonants
sometimes
renders a line unpronounceable. For example:
He loved, — and oh, he loved so well
That sorrow scarce dared break the spell. |
At times, again, the rhythm lapses, in the most
inartistical
manner, and evidently without design, from one species to another
altogether
incongruous; as, for example, in the sixth line of these eight, where
the
tripping anapaestic stumbles into the demure iambic, recovering itself,
even more awkwardly, in the conclusion:
Bright Star of the Morning! This
bosom is cold
—
I was forced from my native shade,
And I wrapped me around with my mantle's fold,
A sad, mournful Circassian maid!
And I then vow'd that rapture should never move
This changeless check, this rayless eye,
And I then vowed to feel neither bliss nor love,
But I vowed I would meet thee and die.
|
Occasionally the versification rises into melody and
even strength; as here —
'Twas at the hour when Peris love
To gaze upon the Heaven above
Whose portals bright with many a gem
Are closed — forever closed on them. |
Upon the whole, however, it is feeble, vacillating, and ineffective;
[page
227:] given token of having been "touched up" by the hand of
a friend, from a much worse, into its present condition. Such rhymes as
floor
and
shower — ceased and breast — shade and spread — brow and wo — clear and
far — clear and air — morning and dawning — forth and earth — step and
deep — Khan and hand — are constantly occurring; and although,
certainly,
we should not,
as a general rule, expect better things from a
girl
of sixteen, we still look in vain, and with something very much akin to
a smile, for aught even approaching that "
marvellous ease and grace
of versification" about which Miss Sedgwick; in the benevolence of
her heart, discourses.
Nor does the story, to our
dispassionate apprehension,
appear "beautifully developed." It runs thus: — Amir Khan, Subahdar of
Cachemere,
weds a Circassian slave who, cold as a statue and as obstinately
silent,
refuses to return his love. The Subahdar applied to a magician, who
give
him
a pensive flower
Gathered at midnight's magic hour; |
the effect of whose perfume renders him apparently lifeless while still
in possession of all his senses. Amreeta, the slave, supposing her
lover
dead, gives way to clamorous grief, and reveals the secret love which
she
has long borne her lord, but refused to divulge because a slave. Amir
Khan
hereupon revives, and all trouble is at an end.
Of course, no one at all read in
Eastern fable will
be willing to give Miss Davidson credit for
originality in the
conception
of this little story; and if she have claim to merit at all, as regards
it, that claim must be founded upon the manner of narration. But it
will
be at once evident that the most naked outline alone can be given in
the
compass of four hundred and forty lines. The tale is, in sober fact,
told
very much as any young person might be expected to tell it. The
strength
of the narrator is wholly laid out upon a description of moonlight (in
the usual style) with which the poem commences — upon a second
description
of moonlight (in precisely the same manner) with which a second
division
commences — and in a third description of the hall in which the
entranced
Subahdar reposes. This is all — absolutely all; or at the least the
rest
has the nakedness of mere catalogue. We recognise,
[page 228:]
throughout, the poetic sentiment, but little — very little — of poetic
power.
We see occasional gleams of imagination: for
example —
And every crystal cloud of Heaven
Bowed as it passed the queen of even. . . . .
Amreeta was cold as the marble floor
That glistens beneath the nightly shower. . . . .
At that calm hour when Peris love
To gaze upon the Heaven above,
Whose portals bright with many a gem
Are closed — forever close on them. . . . .
The Subahdar with noiseless step
Rushed like the night-breeze o'er the deep. |
We look in vain for another instance worth quoting. But were the fancy
seen in these examples observable either in the general conduct or in
the
incidents of the narrative, we should not feel obliged to disagree so
unequivocally
with that opinion which pronounces this clever little production "
one
which would not have done discredit to our most popular poets in the
meridian
of their fame!"
"As the work of a girl of sixteen,"
most assuredly
we
do not think it "
prodigious." In regard to it we may
repeat
what we said of "Lenore," — that we have seen finer poems in every
respect,
written by children of more immature age. It is a creditable
composition;
nothing beyond this. And, in so saying, we shall startle none but the
brainless,
and the adopters of ready-made ideas. We are convinced that we express
the unuttered sentiment of every educated individual who has read the
poem.
Nor, having given the plain facts of the case, do we feel called upon
to
proffer any apology for our flat refusal to play ditto either to Miss
Sedgwick,
to Mr. Irving, or to Mr. Southey.