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[[v]]
[[n]]
Take this kiss upon thy brow!
And, in parting from you now,
[[n]]
Thus much let me avow —
[[n]]
You are not wrong, to deem
5
That my days have been a dream;
[[v]]
Yet if Hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone? [page 27:]
10
[[v]]
All that we see or seem
[[n]]
Is but a dream within a dream.
[[v]]
I stand amid the roar
[[v]]
[[n]]
Of a surf-tormented shore,
[[v]]
And I hold within my hand
15
[[v]]
[[n]]
Grains of the golden sand —
[[v]]
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
[[v]]
While I weep — while I weep!
O, God! can I not grasp
20
Them with a tighter clasp? [page 28:]
O, God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?
(1827)
The texts of 1827 and 1829 differ radically from the text of 1849, and hence are reproduced here in their entirety. The variants of the Yankee and 1831 are given at the foot of the page.
IMITATION (1827)
A dark unfathom’d tide
Of interminable pride —
A mystery, and a dream,
Should my early life seem;
5
I say that dream was fraught
[[n]]
With a wild, and waking thought
[[n]]
Of beings that have been,
[[n]]
Which my spirit hath not seen, [[.]]
[[n]]
Had I let them pass me by, [page 27:]
10
With a dreaming eye!
[[n]]
Let none of earth inherit
That vision on [[of]] my spirit;
Those thoughts I would controul, [[control]]
As a spell upon his soul:
15
For that bright hope at last
And that light time have past,
And my worldly rest hath gone
[[n]]
With a sight [[sigh]] as it pass’d on,
I care not tho’ it perish
20
With a thought I then did cherish.
TO —— —— (1829)
1.
Should my early life seem,
[As well it might,] a dream —
Yet I build no faith upon
The king Napoleon —
5
I look not up afar
For my destiny in a star:
2.
In parting from you now
Thus much I will avow —
There are beings, and have been
10
Whom my spirit had not seen
Had I let them pass me by
With a dreaming eye —
[[n]]
If my peace hath fled away
In a night — or in a day —
15
In a vision — or in none —
Is it therefore the less gone? — [page 27:]
3.
I am standing 'mid the roar
Of a weather-beaten shore,
And I hold within my hand
20
Some particles of sand —
How few! and how they creep
Thro’ my fingers to the deep!
My early hopes? no — they
Went gloriously away,
25
Like lightning from the sky
[[n]]
At once — and so will I. [page 28:]
4.
So young? ah! no — not now —
Thou hast not seen my brow,
But they tell thee I am proud —
30
They lie — they lie aloud —
My bosom beats with shame
At the paltriness of name
With which they dare combine
A feeling such as mine —
35
Nor Stoic? I am not:
In the terror of my lot
I laugh to think how poor
That pleasure “to endure!”
What! shade of Zeno! — I!
40
Endure! — no — no — defy.
[The following variants appear at the bottom of page 26:]
Title Omitted in Yankee and in 1831 (where the poem is appended to Tamerlane), both these texts being fragmentary.
1-5 Omitted in Yankee and 1831.
6 Yet if Hope has: If my peace hath (Yankee, 1831).
[The following variants appear at the bottom of page 27:]
10, 11 Omitted in Yankee and 1831.
12 stand: am standing (Yankee), was standing (1831).
13 surf-tormented: weatherbeaten (Yankee), wind-beaten (1831).
14 hold: held (1831).
15 Some particles of sand (Yankee, 1831).
16 yet: and (Yankee); How bright! And yet to creep (1831).
18-24 Yankee substitutes the following:
My early hopes? — No — they
Went gloriously away,
Like lightning from the sky
At once — and so will I.
1831 makes the same substitution, except that for the last of these four lines, it reads:
Why in the battle did not I?
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Notes:
None.
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[S:0 - KCP, 1917] - Edgar Allan Poe Society of Baltimore - Works - A Dream within a Dream (ed. K. Campbell, 1917)