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CHARLES DICKENS.*
WE
often hear
it said, of this
or of that proposition, that it may be good in theory, but will not
answer
in practice; and in such assertions we find the substance of all the
sneers
at Critical Art which so gracefully curl the upper lips of a tribe
which
is beneath it. We mean the small geniuses — the literary Titmice —
animalculae
which judge of merit solely by result, and boast of the
solidity,
tangibility and infallibility of the test which they employ. The worth
of a work is most accurately estimated, they assure us, by the number
of
those who peruse it; and "does a book sell?" is a query embodying, in
their
opinion, all that need be said or sung on the topic of its fitness for
sale. We should as soon think of maintaining, in the presence of these
creatures, the dictum of Anaxagoras, that snow is black, as of
disputing,
for example, the profundity of that genius which, in a run of five
hundred
nights, has rendered itself evident in "London Assurance." "What," cry
they, "are critical precepts to us, or to anybody? Were we to observe
all
the critical rules in creation we should still be unable to write a
good
book" — a point, by the way, which we shall not now pause to deny.
"Give
us results ," they vociferate, "for we are plain men of common
sense.
We contend for fact instead of fancy — for practice in opposition to
theory."
The mistake into which the Titmice
have been innocently
led, however, is precisely that of dividing the practice which they
would
uphold, from the theory to which they would object. They should have
been
told in infancy, and thus prevented from exposing themselves in old
age,
that theory and practice are in so much one, that the former
implies
or includes the latter. A theory is only good as such, in proportion to
its reducibility to practice. If the practice fail, it is because the
theory
is imperfect. To say [page 465:] what they are in
the
daily habit of saying — that such or such a matter may be good in
theory
but is false in practice, — is to perpetrate a bull — to commit a
paradox
— to state a contradiction in terms — in plain words, to tell a lie which
is a lie at sight to the understanding of anything bigger than a
Titmouse.
But we have no idea, just now, of
persecuting the
Tittlebats by too close a scrutiny into their little opinions. It is
not
our purpose, for example, to press them with so grave a weapon as the argumentum
ad absurdum, or to ask them why, if the popularity of a book be in
fact the measure of its worth, we should not be at once in condition to
admit the inferiority of "Newton's Principia" to "Hoyle's Games;" of
"Ernest
Maltravers" to "Jack-the-Giant-Killer," or "Jack Sheppard," or "Jack
Brag;"
and of "Dick's Christian Philosopher" to "Charlotte Temple," or the
"Memoirs
of de Grammont," or to one or two dozen other works which must be
nameless.
Our present design is but to speak, at some length, of a book which in
so much concerns the Titmice, that it affords them the very kind of
demonstration
which they chiefly affect — practical demonstration — of
the
fallacy of one of their favorite dogmas; we mean the dogma that no work
of fiction can fully suit, at the same time, the critical and the
popular
taste; in fact, that the disregarding or contravening of Critical Rule
is absolutely essential to success, beyond a certain and very limited
extent,
with the public at large. And if, in the course of our random
observations
— for we have no space for systematic review — it should appear,
incidentally,
that the vast popularity of "Barnaby Rudge" must be regarded less as
the
measure of its value, than as the legitimate and inevitable result of
certain
well-understood critical propositions reduced by genius into practice,
there will appear nothing more than what has before become apparent in
the "Vicar of Wakefield" of Goldsmith, or in the "Robinson Crusoe" of
De
Foe nothing more, in fact, than what is a truism to all but the
Titmice.
Those who know us will not, from what
is here premised,
suppose it our intention, to enter into any wholesale laudation
of "Barnaby Rudge." In truth, our design may appear, at a cursory
glance,
to be very different indeed. Boccalini, in his "Advertisements from
Parnassus,"
tells us that a critic once presented [page 466:]
Apollo
with a severe censure upon an excellent poem. The God asked him for the
beauties of the work. He replied that he only troubled himself about
the
errors. Apollo presented him with a sack of unwinnowed wheat, and bade
him pick out all the chaff for his pains. Now we have not fully made up
our minds that the God was in the right. We are not sure that the limit
of critical duty is not very generally misapprehended. Excellence
may be considered an axiom, or a proposition which becomes self-evident
just in proportion to the clearness or precision with which it is put.
If it fairly exists, in this sense, it requires no farther elucidation.
It is not excellence if it need to be demonstrated as such. To point
out
too particularly the beauties of a work, is to admit, tacitly, that
these
beauties are not wholly admirable. Regarding, then, excellence as that
which is capable of self-manifestation, it but remains for the critic
to
show when, where, and how it fails in becoming manifest; and, in this
showing,
it will be the fault of the book itself if what of beauty it contains
be
not, at least, placed in the fairest light. In a word, we may assume,
notwithstanding
a vast deal of pitiable cant upon this topic, that in pointing out
frankly
the errors of a work, we do nearly all that is critically necessary in
displaying its merits. In teaching what perfection is, how, in
fact,
shall we more rationally proceed than in specifying what it is not?
The plot of "Barnaby Rudge" runs
thus: About a hundred
years ago, Geoffrey Haredale and John Chester were schoolmates in
England
— the former being the scape-goat and drudge of the latter. Leaving
school,
the boys become friends, with much of the old understanding. Haredale
loves;
Chester deprives him of his mistress. The one cherishes the most deadly
hatred; the other merely contemns and avoids. By routes widely
different
both attain mature age. Haredale, remembering his old love, and still
cherishing
his old hatred, remains a bachelor and is poor. Chester, among other
crimes,
is guilty of the seduction and heartless abandonment of a gypsy-girl,
who,
after the desertion of her lover, gives birth to a son, and, falling
into
evil courses, is finally hung at Tyburn. The son is received and taken
charge of, at an inn called the Maypole, upon the borders of Epping
forest,
and about twelve miles from London. This inn is kept by one John [page
467:] Willet, a burley-headed and very obtuse little man,
who
has a son, Joe, and who employs his protégé,
under
the single name of Hugh, as perpetual hostler at the inn. Hugh's father
marries, in the meantime, a rich parvenue, who soon dies, but
not
before having presented Mr. Chester with a boy, Edward. The father, (a
thoroughly selfish man-of-the-world, whose model is Chesterfield,)
educates
this son at a distance, seeing him rarely, and calling him to the
paternal
residence, at London, only when he has attained the age of twenty-four
or five. He, the father, has, long ere this time, spent the fortune
brought
him by his wife, having been living upon his wits and a small annuity
for
some eighteen years. The son is recalled chiefly that by marrying an
heiress,
on the strength of his own personal merit and the reputed wealth of old
Chester, he may enable the latter to continue his gayeties in old age.
But of this design, as well as of his poverty, Edward is kept in
ignorance
for some three or four years after his recall; when the father's
discovery
of what he considers an inexpedient love-entanglement on the part of
the
son, induces him to disclose the true state of his affairs, as well as
the real tenor of his intentions.
Now the love-entanglement of which we
speak, is considered
inexpedient by Mr. Chester for two reasons — the first of which is,
that
the lady beloved is the orphan niece of his old enemy, Haredale, and
the
second is, that Haredale (although in circumstances which have been
much
and very unexpectedly improved during the preceding twenty-two years)
is
still insufficiently wealthy to meet the views of Mr. Chester.
We say that, about twenty-two years
before the period
in question, there came an unlooked-for change in the worldly
circumstances
of Haredale. This gentleman has an elder brother, Reuben, who has long
possessed the family inheritance of the Haredales, residing at a
mansion
called "The Warren," not far from the Maypole-Inn, which is itself a
portion
of the estate. Reuben is a widower, with one child, a daughter,
Emma. Besides this daughter, there are living with him a gardener, a
steward
(whose name is Rudge) and two women servants, one of whom is
the
wife of Rudge. On the night of the nineteenth of March, 1733, Rudge
murders
his master for the sake of a large sum of [page 468:]
money which he is known to have in possession. During the struggle, Mr.
Hare-dale grasps the cord of an alarm-bell which hangs within his
reach,
but succeeds in sounding it only once or twice, when it is severed by
the
knife of the ruffian, who then, completing his bloody business, and
securing
the money, proceeds to quit the chamber. While doing this, however, he
is disconcerted by meeting the gardener, whose pallid countenance
evinces
suspicion of the deed committed. The murderer is thus forced to kill
his
fellow servant. Having done so, the idea strikes him of transferring
the
burden of the crime from himself. He dresses the corpse of the gardener
in his own clothes, puts upon its finger his own ring and in its pocket
his own watch — then drags it to a pond in the grounds, and throws it
in.
He now returns to the house, and, disclosing all to his wife, requests
her to become a partner in his flight. Horror-stricken, she falls to
the
ground. He attempts to raise her. She seizes his wrist, staining
her
hand with blood in the attempt. She renounces him forever, yet
promises
to conceal the crime. Alone, he flees the country. The next morning,
Mr.
Haredale being found murdered, and the steward and gardener being both
missing, both are suspected. Mrs. Rudge leaves The Warren, and retires
to an obscure lodging in London (where she lives upon an annuity
allowed
her by Haredale) having given birth, on the very day after the
murder,
to a son, Barnaby Rudge, who proves an idiot, who bears upon his wrist
a red mark, and who is born possessed with a maniacal horror of blood.
Some months since the assassination
having elapsed,
what appears to be the corpse of Rudge is discovered, and the outrage
is
attributed to the gardener. Yet not universally: — for, as Geoffrey
Haredale
comes into possession of the estate, there are not wanting suspicions
(fomented
by Chester) of his own participation in the deed. This taint of
suspicion,
acting upon his hereditary gloom, together with the natural grief and
horror
of the atrocity, embitters the whole life of Haredale. He secludes
himself
at The Warren, and acquires a monomaniac acerbity of temper relieved
only
by love of his beautiful niece.
Time wears away. Twenty-two years
pass by. The niece
has ripened into womanhood, and loves young Chester without the [page
469:] knowledge of her uncle or the youth's father. Hugh has
grown a stalwart man — the type of man the animal, as his
father
is of man the ultra-civilized. Rudge, the murderer, returns, urged to
his
undoing by Fate. He appears at the Maypole and inquires stealthily of
the
circumstances which have occurred at The Warren in his absence. He
proceeds
to London, discovers the dwelling of his wife, threatens her with the
betrayal
of her idiot son into vice and extorts from her the bounty of Haredale.
Revolting at such appropriation of such means, the widow, with Barnaby,
again seeks The Warren, renounces the annuity, and, refusing to assign
any reason for her conduct, states her intention of quitting London
forever,
and of burying herself in some obscure retreat — a retreat which she
begs
Haredale not to attempt discovering. When he seeks her in London the
next
day, she is gone; and there are no tidings, either of herself or of
Barnaby, until the expiration of five years — which bring the
time up to
that of the celebrated "No Popery" Riots of Lord George Gordon.
In the meanwhile, and immediately
subsequent to the
reappearance of Rudge; Haredale and the elder Chester, each heartily
desirous
of preventing the union of Edward and Emma, have entered into a
covenant,
the result of which is that, by means of treachery on the part of
Chester,
permitted on that of Haredale, the lovers misunderstand each other and
are estranged. Joe, also, the son of the innkeeper, Willet, having been
coquetted with, to too great an extent, by Dolly Varden, (the pretty
daughter
of one Gabriel Varden, a locksmith of Clerkenwell, London) and having
been
otherwise mal-treated at home, enlists in his Majesty's army and is
carried
beyond seas, to America; not returning until towards the close of the
riots.
Just before their commencement, Rudge, in a midnight prowl about the
scene
of his atrocity, is encountered by an individual who had been familiar
with him in earlier life, while living at The Warren. This individual,
terrified at what he supposes, very naturally, to be the ghost of the
murdered
Rudge, relates his adventure to his companions at the Maypole, and John
Willet conveys the intelligence, forthwith, to Mr. Haredale. Connecting
the apparition, in his own mind, with the peculiar conduct of Mrs.
Rudge,
this gentleman imbibes a suspicion, at once, of the true state of
affairs.
This suspicion (which [page 470:] he mentions to
no
one) is, moreover, very strongly confirmed by an occurrence happening
to
Varden, the locksmith, who, visiting the woman late one night, finds
her
in communion of a nature apparently most confidential, with a ruffian
whom
the locksmith knows to be such, without knowing the man himself. Upon
an
attempt, on the part of Varden, to seize this ruffian, he is thwarted
by
Mrs. R.; and upon Haredale's inquiring minutely into the personal
appearance
of the man, he is found to accord with Rudge. We have already shown
that
the ruffian was in fact Rudge himself. Acting upon the suspicion thus
aroused,
Haredale watches, by night, alone, in the deserted house formerly
occupied
by Mrs. R. in hope of here coming upon the murderer, and makes other
exertions
with the view of arresting him; but all in vain.
It is, also, at the conclusion of
the five years,
that the hither-to uninvaded retreat of Mrs. Rudge is disturbed by a
message
from her husband, demanding money. He has discovered her abode by
accident.
Giving him what she has at the time, she afterwards eludes him, and
hastens,
with Barnaby, to bury herself in the crowd of London, until she can
find
opportunity again to seek retreat in some more distant region of
England.
But the riots have now begun. The idiot is beguiled into joining the
mob,
and, becoming separated from his mother (who, growing ill through
grief,
is borne to a hospital) meets with his old playmate Hugh, and becomes
with
him a ringleader in the rebellion.
The riots proceed. A conspicuous part
is borne in
them by one Simon Tappertit, a fantastic and conceited little
apprentice
of Varden's, and a sworn enemy to Joe Willet, who has rivalled him in
the
affection of Dolly. A hangman, Dennis, is also very busy amid the mob.
Lord George Gordon, and his secretary, Gashford, with John Grueby, his
servant, appear, of course, upon the scene. Old Chester, who, during
the
five years, has become Sir John, instigates Gashford, who has received
personal insult from Haredale, (a catholic and consequently obnoxious
to
the mob) instigates Gashford to procure the burning of The Warren, and
to abduct Emma during the excitement ensuing. The mansion is burned,
(Hugh,
who also fancies himself wronged by Haredale, being chief actor in the
outrage) and Miss H. carried off, in company with Dolly, who had long
lived
with her, and whom Tappertit [page 471:] abducts
upon
his own responsibility. Rudge, in the meantime, finding the eye of
Haredale
upon him, (since he has become aware of the watch kept nightly at his
wife's,)
goaded by the dread of solitude, and fancying that his sole chance of
safety
lies in joining the rioters, hurries upon their track to the doomed
Warren.
He arrives too late — the mob have departed. Skulking about the ruins,
he is discovered by Haredale, and finally captured, without a struggle,
within the glowing walls of the very chamber in which the deed was
committed.
He is conveyed to prison, where he meets and recognises Barnaby, who
had
been captured as a rioter. The mob assail and burn the jail. The father
and son escape. Betrayed by Dennis, both are again retaken, and Hugh
shares
their fate. In Newgate, Dennis, through accident, discovers the
parentage
of Hugh, and an effort is made in vain to interest Chester in behalf of
his son. Finally, Varden procures the pardon of Barnaby; but Hugh,
Rudge
and Dennis are hung. At the eleventh hour, Joe returns from abroad with
one arm. In company with Edward Chester, he performs prodigies of valor
(during the last riots) on behalf of the government. The two, with
Haredale
and Varden, rescue Emma and Dolly. A double marriage, of course, takes
place; for Dolly has repented her fine airs, and the prejudices of
Haredale
are overcome. Having killed Chester in a duel, he quits England
forever,
and ends his days in the seclusion of an Italian convent. Thus, after
summary
disposal of the understrappers, ends the drama of "Barnaby Rudge."
We have given, as may well be
supposed, but a very
meagre outline of the story, and we have given it in the simple or
natural
sequence. That is to say, we have related the events, as nearly as
might
be, in the order of their occurrence. But this order would by no means
have suited the purpose of the novelist, whose design has been to
maintain
the secret of the murder, and the consequent mystery which encircles
Rudge,
and the actions of his wife, until the catastrophe of his discovery by
Haredale. The thesis of the novel may thus be regarded as based
upon curiosity. Every point is so arranged as to perplex the reader,
and
whet his desire for elucidation: for example, the first appearance of
Rudge
at the Maypole; his questions; his persecution of Mrs. R.; the [page
472:] ghost seen by the frequenter of the Maypole; and
Haredale's
impressive conduct in consequence. What we have told, in the
very
beginning of our digest, in regard to the shifting of the gardener's
dress,
is sedulously kept from the reader's knowledge until he learns it from
Rudge's own confession in jail. We say sedulously; for, the
intention
once known, the traces of the design can be found upon
every
page. There is an amusing and exceedingly ingenious instance at page
145,
where Solomon Daisy describes his adventure with the ghost.
"It was a ghost — a
spirit," cried
Daisy.
"Whose?" they all
three asked together.
In the excess of his
emotion (for he
fell back trembling in his chair and waved his hand as if entreating
them
to question him no farther) his answer was lost upon all but
old
John Willet, who happened to be seated close beside him.
"Who!" cried Parkes
and Tom Cobb —
"Who was it?"
"Gentlemen," said Mr.
Willet, after
a long pause, "you needn't ask. The likeness of a murdered man. This is
the nineteenth of March."
A profound silence
ensued.
The impression here skilfully
conveyed is, that the
ghost seen is that of Reuben Haredale; and the mind of the
not-too-acute
reader is at once averted from the true state of the case — from the
murderer,
Rudge, living in the body.
Now there can be no question that, by
such means
as these, many points which are comparatively insipid in the natural
sequence
of our digest, and which would have been comparatively insipid even if
given in full detail in a natural sequence, are endued with the
interest
of mystery; but neither can it be denied that a vast many more points
are
at the same time deprived of all effect, and become null, through the
impossibility
of comprehending them without the key. The author, who, cognizant of
his
plot, writes with this cognizance continually operating upon him, and
thus writes to himself in spite of himself, does not, of
course, feel
that much of what is effective to his own informed perception, must
necessarily
be lost upon his uninformed readers; and he himself is never in
condition,
as regards his own work, to bring the matter to test. But the reader
may
easily satisfy himself of the validity of our objection. Let him re-peruse
"Barnaby Rudge," and, with a pre-comprehension of the mystery, these
points
of which we speak break out in all directions like stars, and [page
473:] throw quadruple brilliance over the narrative — a
brilliance
which a correct taste will at once declare unprofitably sacrificed at
the
shrine of the keenest interest of mere mystery.
The design of mystery,
however, being once
determined upon by an author, it becomes imperative, first, that no
undue
or inartistical means be employed to conceal the secret of the plot;
and,
secondly, that the secret be well kept. Now, when, at page 16, we read
that "the body of poor Mr. Rudge, the steward, was found"
months
after the outrage, &c. we see that Mr. Dickens has been guilty of
no
misdemeanor against Art in stating what was not the fact; since the
falsehood
is put into the mouth of Solomon Daisy, and given merely as the
impression
of this individual and of the public. The writer has not asserted it in
his own person, but ingeniously conveyed an idea (false in itself, yet
a belief in which is necessary for the effect of the tale) by the mouth
of one of his characters. The case is different, however, when Mrs.
Rudge
is repeatedly denominated "the widow." It is the author who, himself,
frequently
so terms her. This is disingenuous and inartistical: accidentally so,
of
course. We speak of the matter merely by way of illustrating our point,
and as an oversight on the part of Mr. Dickens.
That the secret be well kept is
obviously necessary.
A failure to preserve it until the proper moment of dénouement,
throws all into confusion, so far as regards the effect
intended.
If the mystery leak out, against the author's will, his purposes are
immediately
at odds and ends; for he proceeds upon the supposition that certain
impressions do exist, which do not exist, in the mind
of
his readers.
We are not prepared to say, so positively as we could wish, whether, by
the public at large, the whole mystery of the murder committed
by
Rudge, with the identity of the Maypole ruffian with Rudge himself, was
fathomed at any period previous to the period intended, or, if so,
whether
at a period so early as materially to interfere with the interest
designed;
but we are forced, through sheer modesty, to suppose this the case;
since,
by ourselves individually, the secret was distinctly understood
immediately
upon the perusal of the story of Solomon Daisy, which occurs at the
seventh
page of this volume of three hundred and twenty-three. In the number of
the "Philadelphia [page 474:] Saturday Evening
Post,"
for May the 1st, 1841, (the tale having then only begun) will be found
a prospective notice of some length, in which we made use of
the
following words —
That Barnaby is the
son of the murderer
may not appear evident to our readers — but we will explain. The person
murdered is Mr. Reuben Haredale. He was found assassinated in his
bed-chamber.
His steward (Mr. Rudge, senior,) and his gardener (name not mentioned)
are missing. At first both are suspected. "Some months afterward," here
we use the words of the story — "the steward's body, scarcely to be
recognised
but by his clothes, and the watch and ring he wore — was found at the
bottom
of a piece of water in the grounds, with a deep gash in the breast
where
he had been stabbed by a knife. He was only partly dressed; and all
people
agreed that he had been sitting up reading in his own room, where there
were many traces of blood, and was suddenly fallen upon and killed,
before
his master."
Now, be it observed,
it is not the
author himself who asserts that the steward's body was found;
he
has put the words in the mouth of one of his characters. His design is
to make it appear, in the dénouement, that the steward,
Rudge,
first murdered the gardener, then went to his master's chamber,
murdered him, was interrupted by his (Rudge's) wife, whom he
seized and held by the wrist, to prevent her giving the alarm —
that
he then, after
possessing himself of the booty desired, returned to the gardener's
room,
exchanged clothes with him, put upon the corpse his own watch and ring,
and secreted it where it was afterwards discovered at so late a period
that the features could not be identified.
The differences between our
pre-conceived ideas,
as here stated, and the actual facts of the story, will be found
immaterial.
The gardener was murdered not before but after his master; and that
Rudge's
wife seized him by the wrist, instead of his seizing her,
has so much the air of a mistake on the part of Mr. Dickens, that we
can
scarcely speak of our own version as erroneous. The grasp of a
murderer's
bloody hand on the wrist of a woman enceinte, would have been
more
likely to produce the effect described (and this every one will allow)
than the grasp of the hand of the woman upon the wrist of the assassin.
We may therefore say of our supposition as Talleyrand said of some
cockney's
bad French — que s'il ne soit pas Francais, assurément
donc il le doit être — that if we did not rightly prophesy,
yet,
at least, our prophecy should have been right.
We are informed in the Preface to
"Barnaby Rudge"
that "no account of the Gordon Riots having been introduced into [page
475:] any work of fiction, and the subject presenting very
extraordinary
and remarkable features," our author "was led to project this tale."
But
for this distinct announcement (for Mr. Dickens can scarcely have
deceived
himself) we should have looked upon the Riots as altogether an
afterthought.
It is evident that they have no necessary connection with the story. In
our digest, which carefully includes all essentials of the
plot,
we have dismissed the doings of the mob in a paragraph. The whole event
of the drama would have proceeded as well without as with them. They
have
even the appearance of being forcibly introduced. In our
compendium
above, it will be seen that we emphasised several allusions to an
interval
of five years. The action is brought up to a certain point. The
train of events is, so far, uninterrupted — nor is there any apparent
need
of interruption — yet all the characters are now thrown forward for a
period
of five years. And why? We ask in vain. It is not to bestow
upon
the lovers a more decorous maturity of age — for this is the only
possible
idea which suggests itself — Edward Chester is already
eight-and-twenty,
and Emma Haredale would, in America at least, be upon the list of old
maids.
No — there is no such reason; nor does there appear to be any one more
plausible than that, as it is now the year of our Lord 1775, an advance
of five years will bring the dramatis personae up to a very
remarkable
period, affording an admirable opportunity for their display — the
period,
in short, of the "No Popery" riots. This was the idea with which we
were
forcibly impressed in perusal, and which nothing less than Mr. Dickens'
positive assurance to the contrary would have been sufficient to
eradicate.
It is, perhaps, but one of a thousand
instances of
the disadvantages, both to the author and the public, of the present
absurd
fashion of periodical novel-writing, that our author had not
sufficiently
considered or determined upon any particular plot when he began
the story now under review. In fact, we see, or fancy that we see,
numerous
traces of indecision — traces which a dexterous supervision of the
complete
work might have enabled him to erase. We have already spoken of the
intermission
of a lustrum. The opening speeches of old Chester are by far too truly
gentlemanly for his subsequent character. The wife of [page
476:]
Varden, also, is too wholesale a shrew to be converted into the quiet
wife
— the original design was to punish her. At page 16, we read thus —
Solomon
Daisy is telling his story:
"I put as good a face
upon it as I
could, and, muffling myself up, started out with a lighted lantern in
one
hand and the key of the church in the other" — at this point of the
narrative,
the dress of the strange man rustled as if he had turned to hear more
distinctly.
Here the design is to call the
reader's attention
to a point in the tale; but no subsequent explanation is made.
Again,
a few lines below —
The houses were all
shut up, and the
folks in doors, and perhaps there is only one man in the world who
knows
how dark it really was.
Here the intention is still more
evident, but there
is no result. Again, at page 54, the idiot draws Mr. Chester to the
window,
and directs his attention to the clothes hanging upon the lines in the
yard —
"Look down," he said
softly; "do you
mark how they whisper in each other's ears, then dance and leap to make
believe they are in sport? Do you see how they stop for a moment, when
they think there is no one looking, and mutter among themselves again;
and then how they roll and gambol, delighted with the mischief they've
been plotting? Look at 'em now! See how they whirl and plunge. And now
they stop again, and whisper cautiously together — little thinking,
mind,
how often I have lain upon the ground and watched them. I say — what is
it that they plot and hatch? Do you know?"
Upon perusal of these ravings we, at
once, supposed
them to have allusion to some real plotting; and even now we
cannot
force ourselves to believe them not so intended. They suggested the
opinion
that Haredale himself would be implicated in the murder, and that the
counsellings
alluded to might be those of that gentleman with Rudge. It is by no
means
impossible that some such conception wavered in the mind of the author.
At page 32 we have a confirmation of our idea, when Varden endeavors to
arrest the murderer in the house of his wife —
"Come back — come
back!" exclaimed
the woman, wrestling with and clasping him. "Do not touch him on your
life. He carries other lives beside his own."
The dénouement fails
to account for
this exclamation.
In the beginning of the story much
emphasis is placed
upon the two female servants of Haredale, and upon his journey
to
and from London, as well as upon his wife. We have merely said, in our
digest, that he was a widower, italicizing the remark. All [page
477:] these other points are, in fact, singularly
irrelevant,
in the supposition that the original design has not undergone
modification.
Again, at page 57, when Haredale
talks of "his dismantled
and beggared hearth," we cannot help fancying that the author had in
view
some different wrong, or series of wrongs, perpetrated by Chester, than
any which appear in the end. This gentleman, too, takes extreme and
frequent
pains to acquire dominion over the rough Hugh — this matter is
particularly
insisted upon by the novelist — we look, of course, for some important
result — but the filching of a letter is nearly all that is
accomplished.
That Barnaby's delight in the desperate scenes of the rebellion, is
inconsistent
with his horror of blood, will strike every reader; and this
inconsistency
seems to be the consequence of the afterthought upon which we
have
already commented. In fact the title of the work, the elaborate and
pointed
manner of the commencement, the impressive description of The Warren,
and
especially of Mrs. Rudge, go far to show that Mr. Dickens has really
deceived
himself — that the soul of the plot, as originally conceived, was the
murder
of Haredale with the subsequent discovery of the murderer in Rudge —
but
that this idea was afterwards abandoned, or rather suffered to be
merged
in that of the Popish Riots. The result has been most unfavorable. That
which, of itself, would have proved highly effective, has been rendered
nearly null by its situation. In the multitudinous outrage and horror
of
the Rebellion, the one atrocity is utterly whelmed and
extinguished.
The reasons of this deflection from
the first purpose
appear to us self-evident. One of them we have already mentioned. The
other
is that our author discovered, when too late, that he had
anticipated,
and thus rendered valueless, his chief effect. This will be readily
understood. The particulars of the assassination being withheld, the
strength
of the narrator is put forth, in the beginning of the story, to whet
curiosity in respect to these particulars; and, so far, he is but
in
proper pursuance of his main design. But from this intention he
unwittingly
passes into the error of exaggerating anticipation. And error
though
it be, it is an error wrought with consummate skill. What, for example,
could more vividly enhance our impression of the unknown horror
enacted,
than the deep and enduring gloom of Haredale — [page 478:]
than the idiot's inborn awe of blood — or, especially, than the
expression
of countenance so imaginatively attributed to Mrs. Rudge — "the
capacity
for expressing terror — something only dimly seen, but never absent for
a moment — the shadow of some look to which an instant of intense and
most
unutterable horror only could have given rise?" But it is a condition
of
the human fancy that the promises of such words are irredeemable. In
the
notice before mentioned we thus spoke upon this topic —
This is a conception
admirably adapted
to whet curiosity in respect to the character of that event which is
hinted
at as forming the basis of the story. But this observation should not
fail
to be made — that the anticipation must surpass the reality; that no
matter
how terrific be the circumstances which, in the dénouement,
shall appear to have occasioned the expression of countenance worn
habitually
by Mrs. Rudge, still they will not be able to satisfy the mind of the
reader.
He will surely be disappointed. The skilful intimation of horror held
out
by the artist, produces an effect which will deprive his conclusion of
all. These intimations — these dark hints of some uncertain evil — are
often rhetorically praised as effective — but are only justly so
praised
where there is no dénouement whatever — where the
reader's
imagination is left to clear up the mystery for itself — and this is
not
the design of Mr. Dickens.
And, in fact, our author was not long
in seeing his
precipitancy. He had placed himself in a dilemma from which even his
high
genius could not extricate him. He at once shifts the main interest —
and
in truth we do not see what better he could have done. The reader's
attention
becomes absorbed in the riots, and he fails to observe that what should
have been the true catastrophe of the novel, is exceedingly feeble and
ineffective.
A few cursory remarks: — Mr. Dickens
fails peculiarly
in pure narration. See, for example, page 296, where the
connection
of Hugh and Chester is detailed by Varden. See also in "The
Curiosity-Shop,"
where, when the result is fully known, so many words are occupied in
explaining
the relationship of the brothers. The effect of the present narrative
might
have been materially increased by confining the action within the
limits
of London. The "Notre Dâme" of Hugo affords a fine example of the
force which can be gained by concentration, or unity of place. The
unity
of time is also sadly neglected, to no purpose, in "Barnaby Rudge."
That
Rudge should so long and so deeply feel the sting of conscience [page
479:] is inconsistent with his brutality. On page 15 the
interval
elapsing between the murder and Rudge's return, is variously stated at
twenty-two and twenty-four years. It may be asked why the inmates of
The
Warren failed to hear the alarm-bell which was heard by Solomon Daisy.
The idea of persecution by being tracked, as by bloodhounds, from one
spot
of quietude to another is a favorite one with Mr. Dickens. Its effect
cannot
be denied. The stain upon Barnaby's wrist, caused by fright in the
mother
at so late a period of gestation as one day before mature parturition,
is shockingly at war with all medical experience. When Rudge, escaped
from
prison, unshackled, with money at command, is in agony at his wife's
refusal
to perjure herself for his salvation — is it not queer that he
should
demand any other salvation than lay in his heels?
Some of the conclusions of chapters —
see pages 40
and 100 — seem to have been written for the mere purpose of
illustrating
tail-pieces.
The leading idiosyncrasy of Mr.
Dickens' remarkable
humor, is to be found in his translating the language of gesture,
or
action, or tone. For example —
The cronies nodded to
each other, and
Mr. Parkes remarked in an under tone, shaking his head meanwhile, as
who should say ` let no man contradict me, for I won't believe
him,'
that Willet was in amazing force to-night.
The riots form a series of vivid
pictures never surpassed.
At page 17, the road between London and the Maypole is described as a
horribly
rough and dangerous, and at page 97, as an uncommonly smooth and
convenient
one. At page 116, how comes Chester in possession of the key of Mrs.
Rudge's
vacated house?
Mr. Dickens' English is usually pure.
His most remarkable
error is that of employing the adverb "directly" in the sense of "as
soon
as." For example — "Directly he arrived, Rudge said, &c." Bulwer is
uniformly guilty of the same blunder.
It is observable that so original a
stylist as our
author should occasionally lapse into a gross imitation of what,
itself,
is a gross imitation. We mean the manner of Lamb — a manner based in
the
Latin construction. For example —
In summer time its pumps suggest to
thirsty idlers
springs cooler and more sparkling and deeper than other wells; and as
they
trace the spillings of full pitchers on the heated ground, they snuff
the
freshness, and, sighing, [page 480:] cast sad
looks
towards the Thames, and think of baths and boats, and saunter on,
despondent.
The wood-cut designs which
accompany the edition
before us are occasionally good. The copper engravings are pitiably
ill-conceived
and ill-drawn; and not only this, but are in broad contradiction of the
wood-designs and text.
There are many coincidences
wrought into the
narrative those, for example, which relate to the nineteenth of March;
the dream of Barnaby, respecting his father, at the very period when
his
father is actually in the house; and the dream of Haredale previous to
his final meeting with Chester. These things are meant to insinuate
a fatality which, very properly, is not expressed in plain terms — but
it is questionable whether the story derives more, in ideality, from
their
introduction, than it might have gained of verisimilitude from their
omission.
The dramatis personae sustain
the high fame
of Mr. Dickens as a delineator of character. Miggs, the disconsolate
hand-maiden
of Varden; Tappertit, his chivalrous apprentice; Mrs. Varden, herself;
and Dennis, a hangman — may be regarded as original caricatures, of the
highest merit as such. Their traits are founded in acute observation of
nature, but are exaggerated to the utmost admissible extent. Miss
Haredale
and Edward Chester are common-places — no effort has been made in their
behalf. Joe Willet is a naturally drawn country youth. Stagg is a mere
make-weight. Gashford and Gordon are truthfully copied. Dolly Varden is
truth itself. Haredale, Rudge and Mrs. Rudge are impressive only
through
the circumstances which surround them. Sir John Chester is, of course,
not original, but is a vast improvement upon all his predecessors — his
heartlessness is rendered somewhat too amusing, and his end too much
that
of a man of honor. Hugh is a noble conception. His fierce exultation in
his animal powers; his subserviency to the smooth Chester; his mirthful
contempt and patronage of Tappertit, and his brutal yet firm
courage
in the hour of death — form a picture to be set in diamonds. Old Willet
is not surpassed by any character even among those of Dickens. He is
nature
itself — yet a step farther would have placed him in the class of
caricatures.
His combined conceit and obtusity are indescribably droll, and his
peculiar
misdirected [page 481:] energy when aroused, is
one
of the most exquisite touches in all humorous painting. We shall never
forget how heartily we laughed at his shaking Solomon Daisy and
threatening
to put him behind the fire, because the unfortunate little man was too
much frightened to articulate. Varden is one of those free, jovial,
honest
fellows at charity with all mankind, whom our author is so fond of
depicting.
And lastly, Barnaby, the hero of the tale — in him we have been
somewhat
disappointed. We have already said that his delight in the atrocities
of
the Rebellion is at variance with his horror of blood. But this horror
of blood is inconsequential; and of this we complain. Strongly
insisted
upon in the beginning of the narrative, it produces no adequate result.
And here how fine an opportunity has Mr. Dickens missed! The conviction
of the assassin, after the lapse of twenty-two years, might easily have
been brought about through his son's mysterious awe of blood — an
awe created in the unborn by the assassination itself — and this
would
have been one of the finest possible embodiments of the idea which we
are
accustomed to attach to "poetical justice." The raven, too, intensely
amusing
as it is, might have been made, more than we now see it, a portion of
the
conception of the fantastic Barnaby. Its croakings might have been prophetically
heard in the course of the drama. Its character might have performed,
in
regard to that of the idiot, much the same part as does, in music, the
accompaniment in respect to the air. Each might have been distinct.
Each
might have differed remarkably from the other. Yet between them there
might
have been wrought an analogical resemblance, and, although each might
have
existed apart, they might have formed together a whole which would have
been imperfect in the absence of either.
From what we have here said — and,
perhaps, said
without due deliberation — (for alas! the hurried duties of the
journalist
preclude it) — there will not be wanting those who will accuse us of a
mad design to detract from the pure fame of the novelist. But to such
we
merely say in the language of heraldry "ye should wear a plain point
sanguine
in your arms." If this be understood, well; if not, well again. There
lives
no man feeling a deeper reverence for genius than ourself. If we have
not
dwelt so [page 482:] especially upon the high
merits
as upon the trivial defects of "Barnaby Rudge" we have already given
our
reasons for the omission, and these reasons will be sufficiently
understood
by all whom we care to understand them. The work before us is not, we
think,
equal to the tale which immediately preceded it; but there are few —
very
few others to which we consider it inferior. Our chief objection has
not,
perhaps, been so distinctly stated as we could wish. That this fiction,
or indeed that any fiction written by Mr. Dickens, should be based in
the
excitement and maintenance of curiosity we look upon as a
misconception,
on the part of the writer, of his own very great yet very peculiar
powers.
He has done this thing well, to be sure — he would do anything well in
comparison with the herd of his contemporaries — but he has not done it
so thoroughly well as his high and just reputation would demand. We
think
that the whole book has been an effort to him — solely through the
nature
of its design. He has been smitten with an untimely desire for a novel
path. The idiosyncrasy of his intellect would lead him, naturally, into
the most fluent and simple style of narration. In tales of ordinary
sequence
he may and will long reign triumphant. He has a talent for all
things,
but no positive genius for adaptation, and still less
for
that metaphysical art in which the souls of all mysteries lie.
"Caleb
Williams" is a far less noble work than "The Old Curiosity-Shop;" but
Mr.
Dickens could no more have constructed the one than Mr. Godwin could
have
dreamed of the other.
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